2018年5月24日雅思写作真题回忆

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2018年5月24日场的雅思写作范文一起来了解一下。本场雅思写作小作文为混合图表题,建议将两组数据分开写,大作文为教育类话题,Children are face educational, social and commercial pressures. What are the causes of these pressures? What measures should be taken to reduce them?



雅思小作文真题:

The chart and table show the population size and life expectancy of three countries.Summarize the information by selecting key features and making comparison where is relevant.

小作文范文解析:改题目属于柱状图和表格的混合型,要求描述三个国家在过去和将来人口数量和寿命的变化趋势。建议把柱状图和表格分开来写,柱状图按照国家主体进行描述在,注意时态。而寿命都是上升,国家之间也要对比。范文共计9句话。

雅思小作文范文:

The bar chart and the table illustrate variations in the demographic size and life span in 1950, 2000 and projections for 2050 in three countries including China, the United States and Spain.

It is striking to note that China is always the most populous country, with its population accounting for more than 400 million in 1950. After 5 decades, this figure tripled and then is projected to keep rising to almost 1600 million in 2050. Meanwhile, a similar trend could be spotted in American population, quadrupling to nearly 400 million over the centenary. The Spanish remained the least and the most stable at around 80 million.

As reflected from table, Life expectancy in all the countries is on a rise especially in China where it is projected to double from the initial 40.1 to 79 in 2050. Also noticeable is life of the Spanish is mostly the longest one, growing from 69 to 82.8 years old over this period except in 2000 when it was surpassed by that of Americans who lived 79 years old. American people will also enjoy rising longevity, approaching 82 years old.

In summary, the Chinese always tremendously outnumber Americans and the Spanish and life span is predicted to improve and become almost equal in these countries.

范文原创自牛学老师Alice.Hua 字数 213 words

雅思大作文写作题目

Children are face educational, social and commercial pressures. What are the causes of these pressures? What measures should be taken to reduce them?

范文解析 本题属于教育类话题。重点讨论孩子面临教育,社交和商业压力的原因和解决方法。该题型属于说明文类别,考生在处理文章结构时可以对应问题内容来设置主体段内容。在思考论点方面,关于社交和商业压力这两方面的原因可能稍难一些,尤其是对于“social”这个词汇的理解。如果理解为“社会的”那么对应的原因就比较难以概括了。

雅思大作文文章结构

paragraph 1 :结合时代背景引入话题且写出引导下文的衔接句。

paragraph 2: 论述孩子面临教育、社交和商业压力的原因。

paragraph 3: 论述对应的解决方法。

paragraph 4: 总结题目中的现象和解决方法。

雅思大作文写作范文

In this time and age, it is conceivable that children bear heavy pressure from education, social life and commercial respect. This tendency involves several factors and I would elaborate on them as follows.

The most rooted one lies in the fiercer competition in the society. It is ubiquitous that the modern world is a one replete with competition. In an attempt to survive and attain success in future life, children are required to be accustomed to competing with peers in various situations, ranging from academic performance to personal skills. Besides, most parents place higher expectation on their children, urging them to study harder and diminishing their time on entertainment. Obviously, under such circumstance, excessive stress is imposed on children.

Another factor is that children should follow certain rules to be acceptable by others. Although sometimes they do not quite approve of perspectives or values of peers, they are not allowed to behave aggressively and even conceal their true feeling to maintain a stable and close friendship. In regard to the culprit of commercial pressure, intensive advertising campaigns should be blamed for. Toys and snacks are depicted attractive and tasty in TV commercials; consequently, it is difficult for children to resist the temptation and they tend to require parents to purchase those products. However, the fact is that the result is often contrary to their expectations.

In order to relieve children from high pressure, several effective measures are supposed to be adopted. First and foremost, children themselves had better to adjust their attitude towards exams or competition in schools. To be specific, composure and optimism are essential elements they should be equipped with when encountering challenges. In addition, parents’ encouragement and guidance rather than undue requirements serve the better purpose. Furthermore, government should play a regulatory role in advertising aimed at children, applying the power to censoring the content of commercials.

In conclusion, although it is regarded as a normal phenomenon in the wake of social development, children who are continuously under pressure are likely to suffer from mental diseases. Therefore, children, parents as well as the authority should make concerted efforts to address this issue.

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