2019雅思写作范文分析

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Childrencanlearneffectivelyfromwatchingtelevision.Thereforechildrenshouldbeencouragedtowatchtelevisionregularlybothathomeandatschool.Doyouagreeordisagree?

UKchildrenwatchanaverageofmorethantwoandahalfhoursoftelevisionaday.Itfuelsadebatewhetherchildrenshouldbeencouragedtowatchtelevisionregularlybothathomeandatschool.Idisagreewiththerecommendationthatwatchingtelevisionshouldbearegularactivityatschoolandathome,asthiswouldproducemorenegativeoutcomesthanpositiveones.

ItistruethatTVisofimmensevaluetoserveasakindofeducationaltool.Comparedwithbooks,TVprovidesbothvisualandaudioinputatthesametimeandthereforecaneffectivelyenhancelearning.AgoodillustrationisthatsomescientificprogramslikeDiscoveryorGeographyaregoodsourceofinspirationandmayopenthedoorofwisdomandarouselearninginterestintheyoungminds.Nevertheless,wecannotjustifythatchildrenshouldbeencouragedtowatchtelevisionregularlybecausewecannotdismissthedefectsbroughttochildrenbywatchingtoomuchtelevision.

ThebiggestconcernisthattoomuchtelevisionlessonsTVviewers’ creativityandimagination.BeingbombardedwithTVimages,theirownabilitytoformimaginativepicturesbecomesseverelyimpairedsincetheyabsorbinformationpassively.Asaresult,itservednothingbutstifledtheircreativity,imaginationandcriticalthinking.

Inaddition,increasedscreentimeisdetrimentalbothphysicallyandpsychologically.Itisacommonbeliefthattoomuchtelevisioncouldcontributetosedentarywayofliving,knownasacouchpotato,whichisacontributingfactortothecurrentepidemicofchildhoodobesity.Andthereareotherpsychosocialproblemsassociatedwithexcessscreentime,whichdevelopswhenyoungpeoplespendtoomuchtimeonsocialmediasitesandthenbegintoexhibitclassicsymptomsofdepression.Lastbutnottheleast,increasedexposuretotelevisioncouldpoisonchildren’sinnocentmind,arouseone’sviolentimpulseandmisleadone’slifeoutlook.

Inconclusion,IthinkthemainpointhereisnottobanordiscouragechildrenfromwatchingTVcompletely,buttomakesurethattheydonotwatchtoomuchTVorwatchTVindiscriminately.ThereforeitisstronglysuggestedthatchildrenspendalimitedtimeinfrontofTV.Besides,parentsandteachersshouldgiveguidancetochildrenasforthecontentstheyarewatching.

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